1, 4, 5, and the last photo are my favorites!! It shows how upset he is about his home being burned and the first one shows his house as a whole. Those are my favs. Really interesting series, it would be cool to do more and have his house from the start!
I really love these! All of the images are really strong, in particular I like the second, third, fifth, sixth, and eighth. I think that you should choose ones that directly portray a narrative
Your narrative is so strong! I think you did a really good job capturing his "emotion" and the flames engulfing his poor little book house. You can almost feel the fire. I love that you set the book on fire!
This narrative is really cooooooool!! I love them all, for real. I like the change of space from inside the house to outside, it definitely helped a lot to tell the story of the progress of the house burning down.
1, 4, 5, and the last photo are my favorites!! It shows how upset he is about his home being burned and the first one shows his house as a whole. Those are my favs. Really interesting series, it would be cool to do more and have his house from the start!
ReplyDeleteI really love these! All of the images are really strong, in particular I like the second, third, fifth, sixth, and eighth. I think that you should choose ones that directly portray a narrative
ReplyDeleteYour narrative is so strong! I think you did a really good job capturing his "emotion" and the flames engulfing his poor little book house. You can almost feel the fire. I love that you set the book on fire!
ReplyDeleteI love these images. I think they are very successful in showing emotion -- they feel depressing, sad, lonely, and at times dramatic.
ReplyDeleteI think that your use of fire is very effective in portraying emotion and provides a dynamic feeling and movement. It adds to your concept, as well.
This narrative is really cooooooool!! I love them all, for real. I like the change of space from inside the house to outside, it definitely helped a lot to tell the story of the progress of the house burning down.
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